GREAT
Some small doubts only.
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Can you see a light,
sounds more like
Can you see
the lights,
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As I looked on I saw the crowds
who gathered, walk away
sounds more like
As I looked on I saw the
clouds
who gathered, walk away
but clouds walk away is not a very common phrase (7 findings on google)
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In the last but one phrase in the line
Let me remain where thee is light
a
r is missing.
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hope that helps
thefallen
P.S.
That is my favourite text on the album
because my motto in life is to see
always the good things in life and overcome the dark
There is no light without dark -
and as darker the world becomes as more precious is the light
It is the same as with the sky at night.
Everywhere, any direction you look, there is a star which shines.
We only cannot see the light, because we do not look long enough.